I’m serving blueberry daydreams with cherry sky pies.
Let’s get naked for a few hours and have a very productive late afternoon.
When the sun was born, God passed her around for all of us to hold. She glowed brighter with each of our kisses until she was just plain out of control on fire with our love.
I tell you this because I am in free fall orbit, and it’s not nearly dinnertime.
For the mythological Gooseberry Garden and Poetry Jam's question about Aphrodite's Jam.
For the mythological Gooseberry Garden and Poetry Jam's question about Aphrodite's Jam.
59 comments:
oohhh... lovely way of saying "productive afternoon" ;)
You have painted beautiful images with your words!
I love it! :-)
hot, warm, yummy, and fulfilling piece.
Wow my kind of afternoon, unless your at work and get naked, that be kind of scary..haha
Novel thought and novel way of presenting it..very warm!
very cool...a couplesemi random thoughts brought together in wonderful symmetry...like those afternoons...and the freefall isvery sweet without tipping the scale into cheese...
You comments about the sun and love are awesome! Unique and somehow so true! Love this poem!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/
This makes me want to go watch Love in the Afternoon! But I gotta get back to work, sigh.........
um yeah, i'll take two of the second paragraph to go and skip the rest. ciao! :)
Loved the opening lines...
Those "productive late afternoon[s]" always end up being REPRODUCTIVE for me!
I love the imagery. Sweet and sexy post!
I'm serving blueberry daydreams with cherry sky pies...I will have some of that please :) Beautiful poem...a lift to the spirits...kudos!!
... absolutely one of loveliest, most creative pieces I've read.
Love this! Great intro..it got my attention right away. :)
oh ed - i'm in desperate need for some blueberry daydreams with cherry sky pies...so worn down today...your post brought a much needed smile and sigh...thanks..
amazing.
such an imagination on you.
thanks for the sugar:)
i wanted to dish out something light and tasty. this felt like a fresh salad with some sweet and sunny ingredients tossed together.
You always write THE BEST closing lines. Thanks for your comment on my blog today; it meant a lot.
bravo,
enjoyed it.
Your poem makes my mouth water both literally and figuratively. Fabulous, Ed! xo
Delicious! Loved the blueberry daydreams with cherry sky pie ...gorgeous image! :)
Oh! I liked this so much!! What lovely imagery. Hit the spot!
Lady Nyo
Your writing is beautiful, plain and simple. Thanks for visiting Women: We Shall Overcome and leaving a comment. I'm becoming your newest follower and I hope you'll follow me.
Love,
Lola
I like the whole piece, but especially the third paragraph. Thanks for the smiles, I needed that.
I agree with someone who commented earlier. Really liked the third paragraph. Nicely done!
Pat
www.critteralley.blogspot.com
I'm going to Starbucks.
Hell with dinner! I'll be over to your place for blueberry daydreams and cherry sky pie!
Hi Ed, that's what i like the about ur blog posts, they make me go for a second read.;) good ..
Ed, Ed, Ed, your poems are magical!! And each seemingly better than the last. Not that the earlier ones sucked, or anything. I don't mean that at all.
I just like your mind and heart and how they fling out these special gems.
Mmm... love the first stanza. Very enticing, Ed.
:)!
i'm with everybody else (well at least all the ones that i read..) I love it!
being productive late in the afternoon is very healthy and can image how the sun feels ;-)
Thanks!
Leontien
I have nothing else to comment but just 'your writings took my breath away once again!' :) Love all your posts, always gave me inspirations ;)
xx
Erika
http://www.erika-t.blogspot.com
I remembered Owl City's Vanilla Twilight with your "I’m serving blueberry daydreams with cherry sky pies."
I just followed your blog...hopefully, you can follow mine, too.
Godspeed! :)
i'll take a chai tea, hot, made with soy, please:)
the sun's ablaze in our love.... yeah!!!
wow to that :))
*smiles*
I loved it :)
It's short and wonderful :)
different thoughts juxtaposed in beautiful symmetry ... just like a yummy salad :-)
Loved this! Very tasty indeed, Ed.
A very productive afternoon, indeed! I feel very warm inside suddenly...
I agree with the "hot, warm and yummy" thanks for a visual feast to start my day.
Thanks also for your kind words re: my novel. I'm guessing you have or will also have one of those in progress? You certainly have the talent to do it right.
Happy Thursday, G :<)
wonderful. Hugs
I just had to let you know that I love your blog so much, I added you to my blogroll :)
um...I'll take a serving of that! :)
Who could resist a recipe like that?
This is just beautiful! If you're serving, I will be waiting in line at the door!
Ed, a delicious write. I love it!
Ed, I must say your words always conjure up an amazing image. You paint pictures with your writing. Have a great weekend. Mickie
Lovely. Thank you.
hello,
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/09/week-7-poem-of-week-on-mythology.html
I have
given your entry a honorable mention for week 6, thanks for the support.
hello,
http://gooseberrygoespoetic.blogspot.com/2011/09/week-7-poem-of-week-on-mythology.html
I have
given your entry a honorable mention for week 6, thanks for the support.
Awesome ... and image creating. I loved it from the first line.
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention award. It is well deserved.
Namaste,
Isadora
Your writing is beautiful, Ed! I love this!
Delightful. :-)
"..glowing brighter with each kiss, till out of control."
How I love that sentence.
I like this poem, the idea of being productive ! :)
Beautiful image with your words
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