When the shadows grow so dark and night appears to have conquered the land, I genuflect and kiss the claw of the dark master. I’m very reliable that way. Put a little pressure on me and I powder like ash.
A little friction lets out so much blood because I celebrate the cuts. I salt them and stew.
You are a peppermint cupcake in my throat, but don’t look for me tonight.
I’m tonguing someone else.
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~~~COOL~~~ ;D
WOW!
Yipes!
You are really going into creepy land, Halloween getting to you?..haha
def a darker piece...your word choice really drives the feel of this...well done....
Wow! I think I could write a whole novel about this one!
The words are few - but filled with so many mind pictures. I particularly love the line..."put a little pressure on me and I powder like ash". Don't know why exactly....maybe because it is what I am afraid of about myself... Stopping by via Jill...thanks for stopping by my place too!
Nice piece...and I had to look up the word genuflect! :)
Wow. Telling, ardent, nearly enticing. Saliva does heal wounds, but please do not be mean to peppermint cupcake.
Creepy, but beautiful ..or maybe it's creepy that i find this beautiful..
This piece is dark, powerful, and makes you think. I would call that a success! :)
Whoa... that was deep and kind of creepy... I had to read it a couple of times, actually.
I had so many different reactions to every line in this one.
Confusing in a most pleasurable way.
Serving the dark master, it seems. Or is that "dark passenger?" Nicely done.
a dark piece ed...that's where pressure can take us if we're not careful...tonguing someone else gave me shivers...
nice...great composition...:)
After the day I've had, this all appeared frightenly apt. I shall return when I feel slightly more objective.
i'm getting more comfortable unfurling my dark side here. fun!
thanks for the sugar:)
Ooooh, I likey your dark side a LOT! Awesome write, Ed. xo
Ohhh very dark and ...sensual too!
A lovely piece.
EFFING AWESOME! More please...
Damn it Ed. You are outwriting yourself!
Oh...and welcome to the dark side. See, it ain't so bad (heh heh)
Ed, should you really admit all this? :) Haha!
I think I need this explained to me.
I've had a very sheltered upbringing, you know.
Love it.
A perfect way to ring in October, my friend. :)
Hi Ed, just to let you know I nominated you for this award:
Versatile Bloggers Award
Your words always invoke emotion. You never leave me unmoved. I, too, love the pressure line, and the last killer tonguing one. A surprise. You surprised me again.
""You are a peppermint cupcake in my throat""
Ohhhh, I love that line, ed. X
So who were you tonguing? And are you cutting yourself?
Sorry. I have to be sassy in my comments. It's all I got.
Haha.. short and clear ..;)
Loved this line..
"You are a peppermint cupcake in my throat"
:) :)
strength and weakness all in one
pretty intense n dark...
nice read!!
oh yes...very dark and intriguing! A peppermint cupcake...lol, now that's interesting!
You really went to some dark places with this one! It touches some places we don't like to visit, which is what makes it so powerful.
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