I have learned something worth learning.
Sure, I know how to touch your body a thousand different ways.
But it’s love that brightens the sky.
And making you happy is the greatest turn-on of all.
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- Ed Pilolla
- I'm an independent journalist living in Southern California who also enjoys writing creatively.
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49 comments:
smiles. and touch is only one aspect to that happiness...
Oh that is the brightest of skies. You have learned well. And this is the loveliest piece.
That picture fits your words so well. Beautiful.
gorgeous! love the photo :)
ed,
so beautiful, My Mr. Neruda
Wow. Just wow.
So beautiful, Ed. Thank you for being you.
Love,
Lola
This is sweet.
Ed, that is just beautiful!
it's one of those things we want the one we love to say to us, that's all that matters, seeing them happy. i don't think there's anything better than loving someone and seeing them smile. it's brilliance, it's pure.
You gotten this right. Love brightens the soul and everything else just gets better after that, doesn't it. Hands are good too though...
hey,
thankyou so much for your precious comments in there..! :)
i really do appreciate it..!
and i desperately do wish that someday i can write like you..! :)
there's serenity in your words and i can feel the peace..! :?)
thanks
tc
I like the photo but all this talk about touching has made me prudeish.
Wonderful. A new perspective on love. Well penned. :)
certainly something that anyone would want to hear from the one they love.
so very beautiful.
I love this :) It's worded so perfectly. I can only imagine the cute love notes you leave around for ur girl.
Sounds like you are a wise man. It doesn't matter if it took a while. Great photo too Ed.
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The picture perfectly matches the words...
There are so many facets to a relationship. Touch/sex is actually so minor without all the rest. When we each focus on the happiness of the other, amazing fireworks!
Wonderful words.
That last line is my mantra. I'll assume the royalty check is in the mail?
Feeling good when you make someone else happy does light up the sky, doesn't it? Very nice.
Awwwww are you just so nice today haha..but yes so true, so many ways and it does feel good.
smiles ... so true ... but I thought men think different :P
Wise and loving words! Knowing that you and you alone brought true happiness to your love is as you wrote "the greatest turn-on of all." It feels amazing for both!
This was .. flawless.
You write wonderfully!
Better late than never?
Thank you for your blog visit Ed to Amish Stories, and please visit with us again, as well as your readers. Richard from the Amish community of Lebanon,pa.
Aww so sweet!
Aww... this is so sweet Ed, and true!
It's all in the mind, I believe.
Happy to learn this too ~
Oh, Ed, What a lovely sentiment--every girl in the world would love to hear those words. Nice work!!!! Mickie :)
Amen! You really do understand women!
Beautiful sentiment!
Pat
Critter Alley
where was this shot taken?
ed,
This makes me weak in the knees. You know I love your way with words. Namaste..............cj
Have been underground - back soon.
better to be a slower learner than a never learner
Awesome Ed..
short yet deep
loved it
Amazing, this is so very very beautiful. i applaud you for putting this up here x)
I love the exploding yellows captured in the photo. There are at least a 1000 hues that reflect the sentiment 'thousand different ways.' I admire your art, Ed, your photos and words. Thank you.
aww cute post, yes it is love that brightens :D
Ah, better late than never, Ed! Beautiful words!
It's the love that matters :)
Lovely! Very well written :)
Nice work...love makes the words and touches have such depth the soul is reached
--ed,
you are the perfect example of why women LOVED & Worshiped the poets.
xx
This is so beautiful, Ed!!
This made me cry.
I have a poet for a son, Ed. He is 16. A beautiful, breathtaking boy...who has been shot down by every girl he has asked out in school this year.
They all pass him over for the football star, the swimteam star, the soccer star.
And he comes to me and I say, let's go for a long drive and I let him swear and drop the F bombs with the windows in the minivan rolled up.
And I drive and listen: and I say the F bombs along with him.
Eff them, sweet boy. They have NO IDEA! We scream it together.
Your post brought me to tears today.
Gorgeous.
I wish more men like this, existed.
But most are just storm clouds.
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