tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post3674251040870466592..comments2023-10-29T00:56:13.579-07:00Comments on Ed Pilolla: Late Summer MadnessEd Pilollahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-50994794689392859522011-09-19T20:50:16.902-07:002011-09-19T20:50:16.902-07:00I am completely intrigued by your vivid word desig...I am completely intrigued by your vivid word design. Very powerful!Janet Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126248666972072628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-72249857547429636142011-09-19T11:52:21.053-07:002011-09-19T11:52:21.053-07:00I love this Septmber forecast! Just what I needed ...I love this Septmber forecast! Just what I needed to read today! Beautiful!Torihttp://torimaclennan.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-4770137836255708832011-09-18T18:39:39.521-07:002011-09-18T18:39:39.521-07:00I enjoyed the mystic quality of this. Quality poem...I enjoyed the mystic quality of this. Quality poem.Elliot MacLeod-Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03101422996950773526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-61139131732054150922011-09-18T09:14:11.634-07:002011-09-18T09:14:11.634-07:00Hi Ed! I've never experienced fall because I c...Hi Ed! I've never experienced fall because I come from the other side of the world (Philippines). But your post made me feel like I just did. Brilliantly written, Ed! You're an amazing poet! :-)Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10328342211129410370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-11728318568439888932011-09-17T20:20:22.661-07:002011-09-17T20:20:22.661-07:00I've read several of your poems. Beautiful wor...I've read several of your poems. Beautiful words! I would very much like to fall in your fields and forget my worries.Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01797214493308780866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-25848322107230425272011-09-17T19:51:25.378-07:002011-09-17T19:51:25.378-07:00I've already had a few September days like thi...I've already had a few September days like this.. all have ended beautifully.. much like your poetry.Hilaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787493532006658679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-60800889592123841302011-09-17T19:25:04.729-07:002011-09-17T19:25:04.729-07:00I love the allegory of sculpting clouds...I love the allegory of sculpting clouds...Paulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666092475697376974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-13950462835631755592011-09-17T18:48:35.588-07:002011-09-17T18:48:35.588-07:00whoooo i LIKE IT!
great great word use and it make...whoooo i LIKE IT!<br />great great word use and it makes me think, like hard! haha<br /><br />Thanks Ed!<br />And about the Hershey thing, i just do not like the taste... maybe i am a little spoiled with all the Dutch, Belgium and German chocolate!<br /><br />LeontienLeontienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15311969195332643600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-35864579001393760572011-09-17T15:45:07.720-07:002011-09-17T15:45:07.720-07:00Ed,
This piece has certainly spawned a variety of...Ed,<br /><br />This piece has certainly spawned a variety of comments and interpretations! Somehow, it feels gauzier than your other works with which I am familiar, but I love it's translucence of spirit. Favorite phrase? "The Wind will do nothing except anything you say."<br /><br />Another wonderful poem. Man, I am glad I found your site!<br /><br />Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://cjschlottman-mypoems.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-24193706063292645822011-09-17T12:30:43.383-07:002011-09-17T12:30:43.383-07:00thanks for the sugar:)
heaven, good luck on the i...thanks for the sugar:)<br /><br />heaven, good luck on the interview.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-25613280593663521942011-09-17T09:49:51.398-07:002011-09-17T09:49:51.398-07:00What a gorgeous poem! Gorgeous!What a gorgeous poem! Gorgeous!RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-40348056744345184922011-09-17T07:44:39.182-07:002011-09-17T07:44:39.182-07:00I like that forecast but only without the cold nig...I like that forecast but only without the cold nights. Though autumn is fine with me, I dread the coming of winter. Too cold here from where I am.<br /><br />Worries.. I am though for next week. Have a job interview I hope to get. Maybe excited is a better word. <br /><br />Happy weekend ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-79856448034464534582011-09-17T06:04:47.570-07:002011-09-17T06:04:47.570-07:00"Then I leaked darkness into the sky and swir..."Then I leaked darkness into the sky and swirled a wish."<br /><br />"I wished for man to feel the shortening of days."<br /><br />Absolutely wonderful! Feels like you read the inside of my head.Ms. Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15688062262144014969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-81250169803938244932011-09-17T04:02:24.341-07:002011-09-17T04:02:24.341-07:00I like your September forecast. It's how life ...I like your September forecast. It's how life needs to be more than from time to time.Su-sieee! Machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06358274514829649380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-21278715446641135252011-09-17T03:09:51.297-07:002011-09-17T03:09:51.297-07:00What wonderful lines; I really like this poem.
Th...What wonderful lines; I really like this poem.<br /><br />Thank you for visiting Friko's World. I've had a look round your presence here in cyberspace; my, there's a lot to see. I shall certainly come and explore further.Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-10326791766256488432011-09-16T18:55:35.662-07:002011-09-16T18:55:35.662-07:00I have to agree with Elisa I loved that sentence a...I have to agree with Elisa I loved that sentence and the very last one. Very cleverly written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-54313524117270599912011-09-16T18:17:24.501-07:002011-09-16T18:17:24.501-07:00laura, thank you.
kenia, thanks. i'm first ge...laura, thank you.<br /><br />kenia, thanks. i'm first generation italian-american, as they say. all the way through. but i picked up a book on native american myths earlier in the year and it stirred me, yes:)Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-24824090643232152232011-09-16T18:13:04.321-07:002011-09-16T18:13:04.321-07:00"...I leaked darkness into the sky and swirle..."...I leaked darkness into the sky and swirled a wish." beautiful Ed.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-63734772880300362812011-09-16T18:05:46.406-07:002011-09-16T18:05:46.406-07:00Are you half Native American? I like your connecti...Are you half Native American? I like your connection with the Nature, every line you write sounds like an old chant echoing in the Universe through you now, lines flow like music.<br /><br />Take care and keep smiling. <3Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-67387235219073473972011-09-16T17:57:16.360-07:002011-09-16T17:57:16.360-07:00debbie, with a disjointed piece like this, the mea...debbie, with a disjointed piece like this, the meaning is what you take away. i normally like to be more clear, but with this i just aimed for a stormy day with a soft landing.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-86576514059978704502011-09-16T17:51:03.807-07:002011-09-16T17:51:03.807-07:00shawnacymariekiker, thanks for your kind words. i ...shawnacymariekiker, thanks for your kind words. i like your stuff as well and i'm looking forward to reading more. <br />you are right. that line is a little bit awkward. i'm going to attribute it to the madness:) it's the easy way out:)ed pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14810299925068571517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-75235902774213883342011-09-16T17:46:48.313-07:002011-09-16T17:46:48.313-07:00the fact that it's a little disjointed i'l...the fact that it's a little disjointed i'll attribute to the madness itself. ha-ha! i knew i'd rationalize the technical flaws, and the madness:)ed pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14810299925068571517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-75329585757282571592011-09-16T17:09:24.193-07:002011-09-16T17:09:24.193-07:00i don't think you got it at first becuz i don&...i don't think you got it at first becuz i don't think it works. but hey, that happens sometimes:) on to the next, right?<br />i like your new photo. it's got that burn quality that's neat. yes i say neat:)ed pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14810299925068571517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-76415053629821079242011-09-16T17:01:45.786-07:002011-09-16T17:01:45.786-07:00This is beautiful Ed. I didn't quite get it at...This is beautiful Ed. I didn't quite get it at first because I still had the Seasons in me.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02399300464457820101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-21079063818137204162011-09-16T16:13:25.371-07:002011-09-16T16:13:25.371-07:00I've never read anyone who writes like you; I ...I've never read anyone who writes like you; I like it. You have a flirtatious r/ship with word and phrase, and they seem to enjoy the play....:)♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.com