tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post2918923991820411465..comments2023-10-29T00:56:13.579-07:00Comments on Ed Pilolla: Morning SunEd Pilollahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-91449707504782801522010-05-29T07:31:01.717-07:002010-05-29T07:31:01.717-07:00@rachelsnyder, wow, you can write. i'm so bles...@rachelsnyder, wow, you can write. i'm so blessed to have found your work and i'm happy you like mine. please don't leave:)Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-34498476638700671692010-05-28T22:07:15.482-07:002010-05-28T22:07:15.482-07:00Oh,Ed,what you do to us all -- playing cat-and-mou...Oh,Ed,what you do to us all -- playing cat-and-mouse with these delicious words and unforgettable images.Sometimes I feel I must avert my gaze, as though I have walked into a room without invitation yet never want to leave.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-36964514222148938542010-05-26T14:31:11.133-07:002010-05-26T14:31:11.133-07:00take two...
@anjuli and @she writes, thanks so muc...take two...<br />@anjuli and @she writes, thanks so much. i've had that popcorn line rattling around in my head for weeks. i thought it would be soon in the piece but the last line be the most important. it worked. i'm grateful.<br />@teacher mommy, it's a kick when these pieces organically come out a little balanced. the cosmos, popcorn. even how light it all was balanced with the huge mile-marker in my life of hearing i was a great boyfriend for the first time.<br />@alexandra, it was a magic moment, of the sort that proved to me i am really alive.<br />@andrea, thanks for the interest! i just contracted with an artist to do the cover. it is going to be an actual book, with a little surprise to it as well. really grateful for the support:)<br />@xcrush, yeah, i caught that use of 'banging,' but it was only after i wrote it. i smiled at it. love that you caught it.<br />@wine and words, i love your perspective. is this my life? in that moment it was, but my life is also bolting from relationships, unfortunately. that's part of what allows me to see these moments and cherish them and sculpt them, not building on them. we did do plenty of whispering, tho:)Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-89844734511546475652010-05-26T11:03:29.200-07:002010-05-26T11:03:29.200-07:00Very sweet and touching. :)Very sweet and touching. :)Torihttp://torimaclennan.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-54684354931749172342010-05-26T11:00:14.982-07:002010-05-26T11:00:14.982-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-74026947561430698822010-05-26T09:46:25.085-07:002010-05-26T09:46:25.085-07:00I hope this is true. I hope this is your life. I h...I hope this is true. I hope this is your life. I hope you love this fully and share it, not here...no, not here, but whispered to her face.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-22498171201643723822010-05-26T08:39:23.550-07:002010-05-26T08:39:23.550-07:00It must have been love...I would have told her to ...It must have been love...I would have told her to get up and make it herself since she was watching tv....and you were creating art! :)This is beautiful Ed. I wonder if you meant to create a diversion in the mind when you used the word "banging away" right after you said "afternoon sex"??? LOLXcrushnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-64468941479961679622010-05-26T05:58:37.436-07:002010-05-26T05:58:37.436-07:00Pretty. Is this going to be a physical book event...Pretty. Is this going to be a physical book eventually? If so, I will buy one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-27210653475290508242010-05-26T05:44:59.465-07:002010-05-26T05:44:59.465-07:00Love your use of words! Thanks for sharing these ...Love your use of words! Thanks for sharing these magic moments ...Alexandra Grabbehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16290396567494638238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-21471289657392283142010-05-26T04:17:47.159-07:002010-05-26T04:17:47.159-07:00I love how you interlace exploration of the univer...I love how you interlace exploration of the universe with the "mundane" moments of love. Beautiful.Teacher Mommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11215145025563985398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-44436436565438588602010-05-25T22:50:38.269-07:002010-05-25T22:50:38.269-07:00you made the mundane moments of this life twinkle ...you made the mundane moments of this life twinkle <br /><br />very sweet.Unspokenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16065870952905767595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-63828713926351723392010-05-25T22:15:45.869-07:002010-05-25T22:15:45.869-07:00You have a knack for ending with just the right wo...You have a knack for ending with just the right words-<br /><br /><b>You made the mundane moments of this life twinkle when you asked me to make popcorn next writing break I took.</b><br /><br />I loved the entire piece- but the last sentence just tied it up in a cozy bow and made it utterly delightful.Anjulihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16563616683370799899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-1979295184228651432010-05-25T20:50:38.236-07:002010-05-25T20:50:38.236-07:00i'll take beautiful and tender, heck yeah. tha...i'll take beautiful and tender, heck yeah. thanks!Ed Pilollahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-81162979187882064612010-05-25T20:46:41.319-07:002010-05-25T20:46:41.319-07:00What a beautiful and tender piece. I can almost se...What a beautiful and tender piece. I can almost sense those memories as if they were my own.<br /><br />Thanks for your visit to my blog today.Hilaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787493532006658679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8925676452875149347.post-25863253294739408202010-05-25T20:46:19.256-07:002010-05-25T20:46:19.256-07:00Wow - beautifully tender and magical!Wow - beautifully tender and magical!LadyFihttp://ladyfi.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com